YARG review. Hi Lucy, I've had to think about this for quite a while before attempting to comment. There's so much good writing describing a bleak circumstance that it's difficult to know whether Lying about Sarah should be read for your ability to please due to your choice of words, your perfect ... view book

YARG review. Hi Michael, one of the great strengths of your book is the reason you give for the zombification. I like the 'pill gone wrong' scenario, echoing as it does some of the fears of BIG PHARMA many have in the real world. The pace is great, and the dialogue believable, allowing the stor... view book

Hi Liz, I think you have a good story here. Lots of imagination while allowing the action to proceed at a good pace. Perhaps the dialogue in chapter two could be shortened? And I still don't like the plastic bag :-) best wishes, Scott. view book

Nanobots review. It's just as well I read beyond chapter one, or I wouldn't have seen the way you are setting the book out - introducing new characters one at a time per chapter. I like this approach and have no doubt that when the people do begin to interact we will have a more rounded understandi... view book

Nanobot review, there's a great deal to commend in the first chapter of Phoenix Mistress, and there's also a few points you might consider which would have helped me better follow Skizzy in Old City. The main positive for me is the way you describe this bleak world, where dangers lurk around every ... view book