You are really a great author =). I hope your book gets published. You should focus on your adjectives - too many fucking adjectives but you are really great man =) , LOL :D Also your point of view shifts pretty regularly. =D Malekai cant see his OWN FUCKING FACE.ANYWAYS really good book <3 i wish for you to be 1st other than these other authors. I like the more serious themes other than these other childish books like Animal Cracker - What the hell man??