Dear Joe, I have read the first chapter so far. I found it to be highly personal, quite dark in places (which is no bad thing, as it is clearly genuine and human) and also very touching. By the end of the first chapter, I wasn't actually moved to tears, but it was a mood like that - however, ... view book

Hi Fatema, I've read the first chapter of your story. Nice use of language, very poetic; the manner in which you word things in a little unusual, but that's not a criticism; I just found some of it hard to understand. However, it sounds beautiful and again, very poetic. I haven't listened ... view book

Hi Scott, Just read the first chapter. It's beautifully written, fantastic descriptions. You've created an entire world here, which is under the sea I think...I don't quite understand it all, but it's just a magical world. I can't point out any particular highlights, because the entire chapt... view book

Hi Jane, Thankyou so much! I'm amazed you found it to be so good actually...was it really that well-written? I basically wrote that entire story, all 10,000 words or so in one day of REALLY intense writing. It means a lot to me as well and so I really felt a lot of it. People like Stranto... view book

Hi Faith, Thanks for your lovely comments! I really appreciate all the support I can get. I really want to win with a story like this if I can. This style of writing is probably what I do best anyway...along with sci-fi, other types and thrillers and horror. Yeah, the emphasis on certai... view book