1174 days ago
A big thank you to you all for your comments and to each of you for taking the time to read Virtual Crescendo. Much appreciation and respect to all of you.
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I liked your pitch which encouraged me to read more and so glad I did. The characters are strongly defined and their backgrounds are cleverly weaved in with the action which kept my interest. It is all introduced very well. It is a smooth easy read adding extra enjoyment and involvement in the story...
What I have read so far has enticed me to continue reading. I like your characters, they create a vision in mind. Gladly added to my watchlist and rated for you. I seem to be having trouble with the "Back" function I shall try again later. I'll be back to read more.
WJ Stephens - Virtual Crescendo
The magic of this story is in the nuance of the telling. You feel as though you roght there in the story as you read on. This should be a schoolbook really. I think it that good. best of luck. backed.
I don't know how detailed I can be for you as this is not my type of read. I would say however, that the first chapter is very good writing and reads much better for me at least than the first person prologue. There, I think many of your sentences are too short. In sentence four of ...
'Wolf in the Riddle' has some really solid writing and captivating pace, pleased to back this one.