I've just read your first chapter and I'm hooked. I hate to read a story that's not finished but I can't stop now. I need to know what's going to happen next. The pitch pulled me in and made this story enticing. I hope you post more so I can keep going. Tellis Backed view book

I just read the first chapter of this book and it has me all excited to read on. But I will have to wait till you finish it or it gets published, because I hate to read a book and not get to finish it. But it has everything you could ask for in a story. Mystery, suspense, murder and fanastic inven... view book

This story gripped me from the very begining and I had to read it to the end. I was sorry to see the last few chapters were missing but I would definately buy this book and I think my mother would like it too. I wish you all the luck in the world and get this published soon. Tellis view book

I liked your pitch of this story and the first chapter was excellent. I would like to read more of this action packed thriller, but I see you only have five chapters submitted and I have a hard time keeping track of all the stories I'm tracking now. I'll check back later to see if more chapters have... view book

This first chapter caught my attentipn and made me want to read more. I am a fan of the supernatural and fantasy. Throw in a mysterious magical figure and I'm hooked. Okay I told you I was hooked. I read your book from start to finish in one go, and my only question is when are you going to post t... view book