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Hi

About me..

I'm not the greatest at punctuation, grammar or editing so will happily receive comments on anything I've missed.


*Firstly please don't write to me if you just want a backing as I will not back anything I don't personally click with.*

But in exchange for a detailed comment I will back your book.

I love books and I love stories, which is why I love to write whenever I can, and when I'm not writing i'm working as a Camera assistant on Television shows or Drama's. I've worked on Spooks, Silent Witness, Holby City, Doctor Who, The Descent Part2.

favourite books

Anita Blake by Laurell K Hamilton
The black Jewel trilogy by Anne Bishop
Kelley Armstrongs - Bitten
JK Rowling (of course)
Neil Gaimen - I've read some of his Sandman Comics, Neverwhere. And love his film Stardust. Havent read the book yet.

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Dark Souls

Deloris Collins

Keira lives in an alternate London where city guards uphold the law out of brutality and fear, and demons roam the night.


Out of jealousy and hate Keira destroys the life of a young girl. Her punishment is to be stoned to near death and left to die under the scorching heat of the desert wastelands.

Moments from death, she meets a demon who promises her immortality and vengeance, and with the powerful demon at her side, she participates in the destruction of her entire village. Centuries pass and Keira grows to regret the horror of her choices and seeks redemption. But she knows better than anyone that the last thing The King of Demons is going to let her do is atone for her sins.

 

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I wrote 1053 days ago

Hey Kris Just read the first chapter, and what do i think! It's a book with a very romantic quality here. The relationship between Clara and Ben feels very real. An aside from a few bits (not many) that need editing so that it flows at it's best. I think your onto something here. It's completely ... view book

I wrote 1126 days ago

Hey Well that was a beginning that certainly gets your attention. An innocent couple getting attacked. I like the way both characters are intelligent and think of things some people wouldn't in that state of mind. Andrea wet's herself in a hope to put off her attackers and Derek tries to lie in o... view book

I wrote 1133 days ago

This sounds like a great story, I'd happily pick this up and read next to a fire on a rainy night. Love it. x Deloris Collins Dark Souls view book

I wrote 1140 days ago

Great introduction, full of horror and suspense. One thing i found didn't work for me was the first sentence. It seemed to be written in third person, but then the rest of the paragraph is in 1st person. Shouldn't it be the Angel of death describing what type of night it is? E.g something like, "It'... view book

I wrote 1142 days ago

Great main character, good voice had me laughing, I was brought in by your pitch and haven't regreted it. Ive only read the first chapter so far but there's so much you want to know it propels you to read more. Good luck with this, you have some great stuff here. All my best Deloris Collins... view book

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