I like it when a writer gets straight to the point. The writing is perfect for the genre and for audiences both young and old. The sentences are short, which leads to an abrupt, uneasy feeling that is well suited to the theme of your story. Backed with well wishes Laurelle One of the WAGS view book

You've had an interesting history of working in public service : ) If you can make it in Hackney, you can make it anywhere. I like the expression 'Muscular Christianity' and also the sentiment expressed about the Krays. There's a mixture of sweet nostalia with a feeling that there's something dark l... view book

There are some stories which I read in the hope to get hooked some way through, and there are some which catch you from the start. The pitch raised my eyebrows, and so did the opening. This is both shocking and funny. A great combination. Backed with well wishes. Laurelle One of the WAGS view book

I found the best part of your writing to be your fluid narrative. Your have uniquely demonstrated your character's propensity to be conflicted in her views, and this is executed in a humourous and innocent way. Backed. Laurelle One of the WAGS view book

The title and pitch is very catchy, as is the story. The introduction of your hero's mother is great. I didn't immediately get a strong idea of the ex from his intro but i'm sure you have your reasons for this. Backed with well wishes. Laurelle One of the WAGS view book