Really enjoyed the whole picnic scene, especially the rather dramatic climax. If anyone else had behaved toward Christopher as Catherine did, I would suspect them of flirting. Yet, I really believe she was only being friendly. The trouble is that poor Christopher, starved of female affection for so ... view book

Well, I've just finished reading your second chapter and think this story is really wonderful. The description of the prayer group and bitter, cynical Clare was so vivid. I do hope Catherine and Grania will help poor serious Anne lighten up a bit. I'm wondering if Anne might have been sexually abuse... view book

Yes, I noticed the formatting issues as well. NO idea what was going on with the speech marks and apostrophes. Apart from that, I am really enjoying this novel so far. You have a readable style that flows well. Your characters are also very quirky and well drawn. Catherine is kind but a little self-... view book