feathers- poetic voice. i love the plant analogy, love the last part. The introduction is well written and witty. You easily paint the picture in my mind of the surroundings and make England sound charming. The description is excellent. Comic, the perfect girly read, with the added bonus that r... view book

Begins with clear, lively narrative, the voice/mc seems really well rounded. The descriptions of the children's antics were amusing and sweet. The dialogue from the kids themselves was convincing and i loved the chicken chaos. There's a little too much 'telling' though, for example, when a new para... view book

I love the idea for this book. The tone is perfect from the outset, the concepts and ideas are cool, enticing and intriguing. The MC has a fitting sense of humour and a personality that really shines through, despite not knowing much about her. You feel for her, and route for her after only knowing ... view book

You have an easy, laid back story telling way. Your writing is soothing and absorbing. You write extremely well for English not being your first language, i couldn't tell. The only thing that bothered me was that some of the dialogue seemed a little wooden or blunt in places. As a whole the stor... view book

Hey Kat, Good luck with your book - here's my comment. From the beginning you get a sense of quirkiness and humour which i like. I think the southern accent comes across really well,but as you read more it falters, getting thicker and thicker... then not as much. I like the journal type entry st... view book