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From now on, if you don't thank me for commenting on or backing your book, I'll assume you are rude or too full of yourself to spare a few seconds and will immediately remove your book from my shelf.

If you can't be bothered to thank people who are trying to help you succeed, then you don't deserve to.

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The King of Attolia, by Megan Whalen Turner is my all-time favorite book. I've lost count of how many times I've read it. If you haven't read it, you should. It's amazing.

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If Brothers Were Pumpkins

Krista Alasti

The secret behind his mother's death has turned Clay into a liar. The person he lies the most to? Himself.


“I’ll try not to go on a killing rampage and slice your throat, then.”

Those were 16-year-old Clay Rainey's last words to his (understandably) ex-girlfriend. They were also the words that got him passed off like a hand-me-down to the brother he'd spent the past ten years avoiding--with good reason: lying to someone's back is easier than lying to his face.

No one but Clay knows his mom's car 'accident' was actually a suicide--and that she'd planned for him to join her in the afterlife. But truth-telling is an option that will bring nothing but accusations (dear old dad) and pain (big brother Jason)--as Clay's self-inflicted burn scars can attest.

Now he's got his chance to start over with a new school, a new job, and possibly even a new girlfriend--one who isn't likely to scream in terror at the sight of him. But none of that matters when Jason treats him like an eater-of-babies. To win back his brother, Clay must come to terms with the one thing that scares him the most: the truth.

 

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I wrote 70 days ago

I like your descriptions a lot, and the characters stand out immediately, coming alive through the dialogue. The clever ways you invent to 'say' things are fun to read - like, "shadows were gathering in the parlour at failing light." - it's very creative and beautiful. Bess' sense of displacement ma... view book

I wrote 71 days ago

I don't know if you're looking for suggestions relating to your pitch, but if so, I think the mention of William is a bit abrupt, and there might me a smoother way to lead into his intro, because it was a tiny bit jarring. I do like how you portray a sense of both his and Lucian's characters (at lea... view book

I wrote 71 days ago

I find Faleese to be very relatable in the way she longs for independence, but also still clearly cares for her father and doesn't want to hurt him. The opening scene really does a fine job of creating a sense of dread for what is to come; on the one hand it makes me want to continue, but on the oth... view book

I wrote 74 days ago

The writing is absolutely brilliant and poetic. I love how the imagery and the similes reflect the dark setting, because it really sets the tone. That voice, and the way you described it, calling Charlie's name, was so creepy! The little hints you drop about Charlie knowing somewhere in his mind wh... view book

I wrote 81 days ago

I am so completely in love with your opening sentence. With just that one sentence, I got such a vivid image in my head of your MC and his predicament, and I can already tell this is going to be a quirky read. You are probably already aware of the typos in the 2nd/3rd sentence, so I won't point them... view book

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