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Bill Scott

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Thanks to those who read, gave constructive criticism, and commented on MARGARET ETHEL and HAKTAW HEART.

NUMBERED is about 2/3 of the way done. Hope to find a YA critique partner or two.

Please don't pretend like you've read something when you haven't or liked something when you didn't. Bullshit will make the petunias grow, but doesn't help us as writers.

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A Prayer for Owen Meany
Atlas Shrugged
The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society
Slaughter House Five
Silence of the Lambs
The Help

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NUMBERED

Bill Scott

Kids are disappearing from town. Jacob can unlock the mystery. But no one believes a sixteen-year-old boy who hears voices and sees numbers.


Kids have been disappearing from Little Rock as long as people can remember. Jacob Palmer holds the key to unlocking the mystery. But no one believes a sixteen-year-old boy who's hearing voices and seeing numbers.

 

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rsunseri wrote 1 day ago

Bill, Thanks for your feedback on Jason Earth. I appreciate your ....

Nigel Fields wrote 2 days ago

Hey Bill, Thanks for the forum bump. I just uploaded a revised editi....

Fiona Haven wrote 3 days ago

Hello Bill, A week ago you reviewed Falling Upwards. Just letting y....

TSW Sharman wrote 4 days ago

Bill. Was was important was the "in a good way" part of the statem....

TSW Sharman wrote 4 days ago

Thanks Bill, some very good advice. I especially like a moment of tho....

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I wrote 2 days ago

Ryan, Jason Earth — coolest name ever, BTW. I usually just point out what didnt' work for me or where I stumbled as I read. It doesn't go over well with everybody, but It's what we need to hear as writers to figure out what doesn't work for the reader. "The easiest thing for a reader to do is ... view book

I wrote 4 days ago

Sorry for the delay in the read. I'm loving your Theories. I pointed out the very few places where I had to stop and re-read or got lost. CHPT3/1 There's no bed, that's in the adjoining room. — I stumbled on this. I don't know why I had to read it a couple of times. It's clear now. I think it... view book

I wrote 4 days ago

Sorry for the delay in the read. I'm loving your Theories. I pointed out the very few places where I had to stop and re-read or got lost. CHPT3/1 There's no bed, that's in the adjoining room. — I stumbled on this. I don't know why I had to read it a couple of times. It's clear now. I think it... view book

I wrote 8 days ago

Chpt 2 - "I was supposed to sprint towards the spot where John told me Aiden would catch the ball." This confused me. I'm not sure how John could know where that next spot was. Was he on Aiden's team and feeding her information about the next play to come? If so, that was unclear and gave me ... view book

I wrote 8 days ago

yarg Chris, Your writing is clean so I didn't have much to comment on. I just made a two notes about places in where I stopped, to think about things, long enough that it disrupted the flow of reading. And one paragraph where I thought the action was great but there was a spoiler phrase tell... view book

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