Where are the zombies? I backed this thinking there were zombies. But it's ok. This made me laugh so hard, and I don't even do facebook. Even the pitch made me laugh. You are like the only sit down comedian I know. Still, a few zombies wouldn't hurt. Maybe an almost apocalypse. You know like,... view book

In return for the comments on my book. This is a very well written story, as far as I have read, Jeffrey. The poem at the beginning is excellent. There are a few minor punctuation violations, but I barely even noticed them. There is one thing you might look at. On occasion you use words that ... view book

Thank you for commenting. It is greatly appreciated. I'm glad you liked the stories. I will take a look at the beginning paragraph of Dwarven Logic based on your suggestion. (Yes, Gibbers has traps all over the forest and he forgets where they are sometimes. :-)) view book

I was not fond of your cover at first, but it has grown on me and I would not like to see it changed. I find the short and long pitches very well written, and it very much sounds like literary fiction to me. The writing is very good and interesting. I am easily able to feel and see what the M... view book

There are numerous punctuation problems, none of which, as far as I read, detract from the story-telling. If you tidy up your short and long pitch, it will make a better impression on potential readers. How is Esmeralda's cottage run down? This is a case where you can flavor your story tellin... view book