This is a terrific beginning, very polished writing for this genre and a great premise. I wish you luck with this. view book

Steve, this reads well and I like the action at the beginning of the story. I was also exceedingly relieved to see it wasn't a dream. I'll give you some shelf-space a while. view book

Keef, I really don't remember whether I've commented on this in the past, but having read it now, I can't see why I wouldn't have. I vaguely remember the beginning, but have no idea why I wouldn't have read on. It's funny, beautifully written and the diaglogue is terrrific. It deserves to be much fu... view book

Simon, I usually read through and make comments as I go. As I mentioned in my message to you, I think this book is beautifully written and despite not being a history buff, it's the kind of book that lures me in and traps me. Well done, I'll be back to read more. Cealarenne THE GUARDIAN OF LESSER ... view book

Ian, despite your previous comments, I completely see where you're coming from - or at least I think I do. It's a story of perhaps how people see themselves and their circumstances. And although the 'reality' changes over time, we still carry everything with us into the future. Maybe I got that wron... view book