Hey I have read the first 3 chapters, this book is very touching. Although I didn't understand much about the introduction, But I guess will have the full answer when I have done reading it. I have scored you 6 but You have to wait bit for the full feedback. As I am very interested what is the end of it. Olga13 view book
I am very fascinated by true story...i don't care what is the subject about - but I do know that when it does say TRUE EVENT...don't bother me any more..i am on it... As I read the book, my heart is creeping / want to cry...The story is well written - on formatting - you need to give some space. enter to the next paragraph if necessary... When you get an agent or publisher - they will do (normally ) the formatting..but as this is member site - most of them would advice and prefer to read your book with clarity... I have scored your book 6...and I really hope that it will be noticed by TV / Movies production...Hope that have helped.Olga13 I didn't see much dialogues yet ... view book
AFTER LIFE with Liam Nelson and Christina Ricci...That is how I pitch your book. Although, as i am reading it ...there is lots of humour...dialogues - is well done.Very well described and written...Formatting not comment. the book start well and now i am interesting how it will end... I have scored you 6 because it well deserved... with such great of imagination... Olga13 view book
Hi Angela, I have start to read the first 4 chapters. Lost, loneliness, fears and what could I do to walkway from such pain? I like the way how you did the formatting with the tittle...it does give the ideas of what we have had and what could be done in better way (for the reader). This book is very interesting for each individual within or without relationship and can be introduced to the earlier of ages of reason. Not sure if No-Christian will get the message that you are trying to say in here...but definitely it is worth to try to attract them too... will read more and get back to you... Olga 13 view book
I have read the 1 more about introduction and 2 chapter...where the story really start... I can't tell yet where the funny tale is...I was bit lost at the first read...the tittle is IMAGINE...so that mean you are looking something like INCEPTION... LIFE BEFORE HER EYES but more funny...I have scored you 4 for now...i can always change it when I finish to read all of it...and of course with more feedback on the story...Olga13 view book
Funny, great tone of humour. well written and good formatting. I think Percy play his characters very well. Great of imagination. I am only at 7 chapter..I have scored you 6...Will get back to you of what i think of the story...but so far i am very fascinated ...Olga13 view book
I am at 3 chapter of your book... Reading it I feel like i am watching sex and city... Formatting, descriptions and dialogues are well done... For that I have scored your book 5...will write to you back about what i think about the story when i am done...Till then, all the best.. Olga 13 view book
Hi Ya, I have started to read your book... Because of the style and formatting well written...i have scored it 6..will let you know at the appropriate time about the story... Olga`13 view book
done it is on my WL...will et back to you for honest feedabck and scoring... olga13 view book
I have only one sapce left on my WL and I have chosen Hope's journey. I willt ry to read it and will get back to you with honest feedback and scoring.Something telling me that most of those book that you have umploaded in this site are interesting... what? I dont know - but cant wait to read and see ... Till then, have lovely eveing... Olga13 view book
very good entrance...and well describes of what is going on with humour ...i have only read the 1 but it is now on my WL... as i have 29 books to read before your....(who knows maybe your spiritual touch could shock you when you expected it less....lol) For sure will get back to you for the overall feedback / scoring /backing...till then have lovely week...Olga13 view book
I have put your book on my WL... As stated on my profile...grammar is my biggest weakness...will not be able to comment on formating... although I am very good on analyising / critics theme...will get back to you with feedback / scoring... all the best olga13 view book
your book is now on my WL...i did see that your rank is 19...so even thought that i have not managed to read it on time...i will backed you up in May...(hope you ok with that) as my shelve is already full...I read the picth and did tick my stomach...and the coverage ...well macth... till then all the bestOlga13 view book
your book is now on my WL...althought i have 28 books to be read before your ..so please do be patient...i will get back to you with feedback and scroring...till then...keep writting and have lovely day while we are enjoying the rain...All the best Olga 13 view book
your book is now on my WL...please do give me time to read it as I have 27 books before your to be read and they are awaiting my comment too...till then...all the best Olga13 view book
done on my WL...i have 24 books to read before your..so hope will be able to get back to you by the ned of May... olga13 view book
i dont know how you are going to layout the book when you have to print it... but very touching and well writen on dialogues. i havent read a book at all when i was a child but however i did watch lots of cartoon... Have you tried to send your book to TV production for children...? there is chance that you could get noticed...it cost nothing to try and send your manuscript... I have rated 5*...all the bestOlga13 view book
This is a book to be read when we are in the heart of pain. wake up call for all of us who are in the heart of given up... have you tried to send your book to woman magazine? it is really worth to try... rated 6*...all the best... olga13 view book
sorry for the delayed but here is my feedback... Horror - well if i was teanagers i will love it..but now i am kind old fashion so not really much into horror theme. although i like the characters and the story. I have rated you 5*You do have the style to describe things very well and hope more book to come...dont ask about grammar and formatting as that is my big weakness...but i am sure other member will say something if it appear in your paragraph... all the best... olga13 view book
Hi ya, i have finally read your book and if I was child ..i will definitely want to see it in the form of cartoon...at 7 am or wednesday afternoon just after school... Anyway this is my feedback: very well created of imagery for the children to be part of it as they will read... dialogues very simple and well writtne (something that I could learn on to) I am not sure if there is to be continued... but i hope YesI have rated it 6* all the best... olga view book