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Grey Muir

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New Edits for "The Ice Queen: Blood and Ice Wolves" has polished the first 5 chapters. Chapter 6 is posted. New chapters will be up in another week or so. Depending on distractions and writers block.

I like being book-shelved - so please do, but a good thorough critique is invaluable and greatly appreciated as well. I know how hard it is to spare shelf-time. Thanks.

A Writer needs to write first and foremost. So in that light, I will plan my schedule accordingly.

I am building my platform and can be found on Twitter, facebook, and Wordpress currently. I post on Critters.com and find it a useful site for good critiques.

This year's goal is to write,... and publish. Query letters and writing are going to be my thing. I do plan to post what I learn about submitting to agents and publicists on my website as soon as I find the pages I have written to be readable.

Come see me there some time.

favourite books

The Foreigner Series (and everything else) by C.J. Cherryh
Narnia Series, By C.S. Lewis
Lord of the Rings, By Tolkien of course.
Raiders From the Rings (Out-of -print YA favorite!) by Alan E. Nourse
Andre Norton, Jack Vance, Roger Zelazney,
Tad Williams and Brandon Sanderson
I'm looking for another favorite author or two, if anyone has a suggestion.

Here on Authonomy I recommend:

The Christian Lit Forum
http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/90961/christian-lit-forum/

YALF - Young Adult Literary Forum
http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/100412/yalf-the-young-adult-lit-forum/

The Alliance of World Builders
http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/83246/the-alliance-of-worldbuilders-part-ii/

my websites

http://lordofthequills.weebly.com/     http://barnardcullenauthor.wordpress.com

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my books

The Ice Queen: Blood and Ice W....

Barnard Cullen

Chasing Ice Wolves that killed his mother and sister, Feyt finds a frozen City of Ice that turns back to flesh one day a month.


When Ice Wolves kill his mother and sister. Feyt blames himself. Vowing revenge, he joins the Hunters sent to kill the wolves. Taking refuge from a storm in a cave, Feyt discovers a City of Ice, full of people, animals, buildings… all carved ice. Falling asleep, they’re awoken, arrested by living guards. The City of Ice has turned real.
Hauled before the throne to explain their presence, Feyt meets Princess Persei, who’s just days short of her 16th birthday, when she’ll become Queen. Night falls, and they sleep again, awakening to a refrozen city.

Feyt learns the City is frozen except for one day a month, at the full moon. He discovers the warlock who ensorcelled the city, is the Lead Ice Wolf and murderer of his mother. He must free the Princess and City, before she turns 16, and is forced to marry, giving the sorcerer permanent control of the ancient city. The northern ice-sheet is expanding, driving people south and Caernall, Feyt's village, is beset by enemies allied with the sorcerer. He wants an Ice War to crush resistance before he resurrects the long lost Kingdom of the North, as its new king.

 

The Flight of the Hive: Subjug....

Barnard Cullen

The clone-warriors of the Hive, sent by the Great Mother to subjugate Earth, discover a shocking truth that threatens to shatter both Hive and Humanity.


VETA, clone in the Hive Mother's mighty space fleet, the Flight, is sent through worm-space to an insignificant solar system to conquer yet another minor world. She struggles to deal with a difficult and jealous consort, matters of sacred honor (khree), and Subjugation of a planet. An Emergence accident alerts the planet's rulers, but they're primitives... right?
The American President discovers a brief flash in space brings with it First-Contact with extraterrestrials in the form of an invasion fleet of massive proportions. Will Earth's raging politics and power struggles turn to alliances as the Hive arrives to begin Subjugation?
Mechanical engineer GARRET wishes he were doing more exciting things. Flirting with the secretary, Linda, causes a fight with his arrogant boss and gets him fired. Out to get some air, Garret looks up to see the invasion forces descending and becomes surrounded in battle. Can mankind resist the overwhelming assault?
This routine conquest suddenly goes awry, as clones and humans discover a shocking truth neither is prepared to accept, shattering both Hive and Humanity. Caught in an intergalactic war between the Hive and its nemesis, The Enemy, can both humans and clones accept the truth and survive annihilation. Or not?

 

A Sheep in Wolf's Clothing

Barnard Cullen

Timothy’s a sheep who dreams of being a wolf. He runs away to become one, but the grass is not greener and events turn deadly.


Timothy Sheep is bored with the peaceful Meadows and frustrated with Orthodox-sheep telling him what he can’t do. His parents don’t understand him and he’s picked on by bullies. He dreams of becoming a fearless wolf and teaching everyone a lesson, then he finds a wolf-skin …

Through humorous adventures and misadventures, plus some creative lying and bluffs, Timothy joins the Wolf Pack. He finds ‘clothes do make the sheep’. Dressing and acting like a wolf transforms him into one. After he’s accepted, he discovers other wannabe-wolves have slipped in, too. Soon, Timothy’s enjoying the wild-life, howling and playing with friends late as he wants. He’s living his dreams.

But dreams become nightmares as the wolves’ brutal nature is revealed. With wolves killing wolves, can a ‘SHEEP IN WOLF’S CLOTHING’ survive? Too ashamed to return home to the Meadows and Flock, can Timothy protect his new girl or any of his wannabe friends? Soon he’s changed irrevocably as he’s forced to fight for his life. Will he live to learn any lessons from his wolf experiences?

Humorously parodying gang involvement and its violence, this story is suitable for Middle-Grade, Young-Adult, and Christian audiences.

 

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Charlotte12 wrote 4 days ago

No problem, Gary. I'm just thankful for all the support you have give....

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Hi Grey Muir, I noticed that in your profile you have noticed that....

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Bart Jahn wrote 6 days ago

Hi Barnard...no problem...I jockey books in and out of my bookshelf f....

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Hi Grey, That's really lovely of you, thank you. How are things go....

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I wrote 33 days ago

Hi Bart. Really liked this chapter. God does call us into the most harrowing, and sometimes overwhelming, tasks. "...God will eventually take us to places we do not want to go,..." You spell out your point very well. Paragraph beginning "A biblical adventure of faith..." This paragraph has an... view book

I wrote 83 days ago

Hi Kate, This is a YALF review. I think that you developed your main character very well and quickly in the first few paragraphs of the first chapter. Chapter 1 2nd para makes you identify with the character, good/ 4th para suggest using quotes “…aubergine eyes…” I’d suggest some more common... view book

I wrote 84 days ago

Hi, Kara. This is a CLF review. Your story is well written and is clean of most typos, etc… You also do an exceptional job with your characters and create a great sympathy for them with your word-craft. I greatly like the use of Hebrew terms, with the brief explanations, that you sprinkle in. I ... view book

I wrote 99 days ago

Hi Christine, Here is my CLF review of Five Short Stories With a Twist My comments are merely an opinion at the time I was reading the stories. Take what you find useful or helpful and discard what you don't. I am hoping that my thoughts help a bit. Here they are; Reflections “Days and years... view book

I wrote 122 days ago

Hi. Here's a comment just to post one. I'm glad to see that you were at #5 and I'm hoping you can do it again. Give it all you've got. Worst case, is you are in #1 to start next month. Still got 9 days this month so don't give up easily. Rooting for you. view book

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