First off, my apologies for forgetting to comment on 'A Calculated Embellishment' when I first read and backed it weeks ago. Without doubt this is one of my favorite books on Authonomy (to be honest , I haven't actually had a favorite up to now) and were it up for sale I'd nip out and buy it. I rec... view book

Well...looks like we are in the same vein with our thoughts in italics...that's a relief. That is quite an opening chapter and once again we are in a similar vein...throwing the reader in at the deep end. It is your opening chapter that will sell your book and, if that is what you are about, yours... view book

Great writing, reads like a classic. The word tattas first appears in italics, indicating that it is a word foreign to the English language. So far so good. Tattas reappears and I found myself backtracking to see if I'd missed something. Then I thought is tattas a duty? Making cigars. Somebodys name... view book

Hi Tom, having read a wee bit of Mind Bomb, you will have realized that we are both working in different genres, but then again..... One thing made itself apparent quite quickly as I delved into your first two chapters and that is you've been tweaking this manuscript for some time. It is more or le... view book

Shades o' the Loch Ness beastie. Content fine, dialogue rolling, only thing that struck me was the name tab 'Sinclair' seemed a bit frequent. Someone once pointed out to me that using names lends to a less personal reading experience. I went over my manuscript and eliminated 25% of the name tabs and... view book