David, You are truly a jewel! I don't want to speak to soon, but I have to be honest with you... I have only read to the 1st asterich, and I see great things in you. "1964"," umpteenth time", "forlorn attempt"...These are what I call hooks, and I love them all. The woman is hiding a pregnancy, ... view book

Ian, I am sold on the pitch alone! Your book is well written, interesting, and like none other that I've read. The only thing that I question, and maybe it's because I'm still learning the rules of writing, is when you referred to the child being put to bed as "it's." Should this be he or she,... view book

I think that this first chapter is excellent! It is well written, full of details, and medically correct. I will continue to read as time permits, but there's no question; I have to shelve this one. view book

You have a great way with words... The winged coffin, flailing like a rat suspended by its tail, a roped calf at the rodeo. All of this is great. I read the first chapter and can already tell, it's a page turner. Shelved! view book

This is a great read. I have only read chapter 1 so far, but it's definately the type of book I love to come across. I like the phrase "liquid courage," it hits the nail on the head. I will continue to read on as time permits, its still on my shelf. view book