Ooooh - this is creepy! I like the way the house feels like a solid character in the story. I could picture it - dark and brooding. I know it's written in the present, but I kind of saw it unfolding in front of me like a black and white film. Rebecca definitely came to mind. The use of poet... view book

The premise of this story is really interesting, and seems to have everything - unrequited love, death and ultimately rebirth. And you can't go wrong with a sunshine island either! Although the story seems to have plenty of pace, I stumbled a bit over the writing. I think you may have fallen into... view book

Although this isn't a genre I'd usually read, it's an interesting concept and the writing has a nice flow and pace. I'm popping you on my shelf and wishing you lots of luck. Diana Pascual's Birthday view book

What a lovely premise for a novel. And the content does not disappoint. The writing is easy and comfortable, and I felt engaged from the very beginning. I can see your book providing support and inspiration for people who really need it. On my shelf with my very best wishes. Diana Pascua... view book

I'm not sure this is the easiest font to read on screen. I'd also try to avoid the use of 'apostrophes' and italics where possible - your writing should create the emphasis without relying on punctuation. However, I really like the premise of the story, and you certainly have an engaging start to... view book