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Shimmer

Bradley Group

A new religion is gaining converts at a prodigious rate. It's simple; accept Him, and you'll be blessed. Reject Him and suffer the consequences.


Salvation lies in the name of Malak. Every day, more people convert to His burgeoning religion. His Apostles spread their message across the land, silencing non-believers.

Glenn and Rebecca have managed to avoid Malak's wrath. They see Malak for what he truly is and are determined to stop him at any cost. But the path they have placed themselves on is fraught with danger. Do they have what it takes to return the fading shimmer to the land?

Note: Everything after chapter 6 is currently out of date and only there for the word count.

 

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Hello Brad Thanks so much for backing Falling Upwards. I hope you en....

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NICE TO Meet you, My name is miss lindanechwa . I saw your pro....

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Wow. Thank you for your backing. That's very kind of you.

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Just thought I'd message you to introduce myself. I am the author and....

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I wrote 428 days ago

Ute, Sorry it took me so long to respond. First off, if you are still selling this on Amazon- REMOVE THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS! Why would someone pay for your story if they can read it for free on here? They're like fish, use a couple chapters as bait, make it so that they simply must know how the... view book

I wrote 428 days ago

YARG Review I'll get right to it. The main problem I had with your writing was that the dialogue didn't feel natural to me. It felt as though everything that was said throughout the portion I read was needed to move the story along, and nothing more. What I mean is that I knew I was reading dialo... view book

I wrote 449 days ago

Yarg review I found the premise to be great. You had me at dragons and dinosaurs. I found the writing to be decent, as in other than a few grammar mistakes which will be found in editing, there weren't any problems. I was able to follow the story easily. My only main problem with what I read ... view book

I wrote 637 days ago

I just finished reading the first chapter... and I'm a little conflicted on my feelings. The main problem I had was that I didn't feel connected to the story. I didn't even realize until I began this critique that Nathan mentioned Kay at the beginning. Or for that matter that Nathan was the same per... view book

I wrote 658 days ago

I took a look and noticed some things which would make this a much easier read. You've done the hard part already by writing the entire thing, it just needs overhauled to make it more palatable. The main problem I had was that this read as though it were a synopsis. I didn't feel connected with ... view book

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