66 days ago
Hi! I love stories that make me laugh :DI do not read angst or horror, unless they're quite amazing/funny. Both genres depress me a little too much. But everything else is fair game! I can't promise that I'll back/comment on your novel, but I will at least glance at the first chapter if you ask. Also, I know many of the stories on here aren't edited to perfection, but if your text is riddled with poor grammar, mixed-up tenses, confusing syntax, etc., I'll run away screaming ;)Books will be shelved for a week or so--I don't have the time to read as much as I'd like. If I really like your writing, I may back and comment! Gasp...I'm an inexperienced writer, so take my advice with a grain of salt ;) Projects (not yet posted--at the rate I'm writing, perhaps they never will be, sadly): THREAD ~ The gods exiled Sereny years ago, yet now they command her once again.The Underworld plots to tear apart Olympia and the mortal realm; she must stop this. The Fates, however, have something else in mind. Urban fantasy/suspense.MARIONETTE ~ Vivienne has the looks, brains, talent, and (stolen) money. Anything and everything she wants, she gets with a wink and a few pretty lies. But her latest target plays her game and plays it well. Comedy/drama/romance.
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Hello Steven! As requested, I read a couple of chapters :) Your writing is excellent. I'm not a fan of the voice -- it it's a little bland to me, but it works with your style. As for the story, I'm not really sure why you labeled this a thriller...it lacks suspense so far. Ten chapters in, the Presi...
Hi Tom! Just dropping a little comment -- your dialogue is wonderful ;) Seriously, I think I would be happy just reading that and nothing else. I'm not sure about the YA label, because of the story's pace (slower than most YA, though I don't find that a problem) but the writing is great! Backed!!
I really like your writing style--short yet descriptive sentences and few superfluous words keep the story moving along very well. You do need some editing, which shouldn't be too hard. I'm not a fan of the formatting, especially when the times only interrupt a continuous scene, bu...
"Manolo Blahniks" or just call them Manolos ;) I like this -- fun teen 'shenanigans', and better written than many YA books out there. There are a few parts where it seems like a sentence or two are somehow missing, and that causes temporary confusion for me. But the characters are interesting and h...
ADORABLE. Seriously :) Excellent writing, characterization, etc. People have already mentioned all this, so that is my one word contribution. I want to give Father Dominguez a big hug and cheer him on--go, Father!! I'm hoping he gets the girl, of course 8D
Already backed! Yay!