ERS Commas! Arhythmic. Over-written. view book

Michael Sorry this took a while. Anyway, I looked at both your books and decided to plunge deeper into this one. It's reasonably well-written but I don't think the writing is as tight as your other book. There are quite a lot of opportunities to trim the prose. Perhaps too many descriptions f... view book

I finally finished reading. This is spectacularly good writing: sparse and spare, brutal and poetic, and loaded with punchlines. I don't think there was one story here that didn't make me blush, or press at least one of my buttons. The idea of weaving these stories into a novel is very ambitious but... view book

Hi Angela A friend suggested I take a look at your book. I didn't have long so I dived in to Chapter Twelve. It's close to perfect. I can entirely relate. And I don't even like Nirvana! I was going to say that I would come back and read more, but I see this is already available on KIndle so I'... view book

This is one of those books that makes me feel like I'm missing something. From the opening words of your pitch, I find the writing mannered and jarring. Also confusing. I guess it has to be a deliberate style choice but I cannot read sentences like "He turned at the boy and girl staring in witness o... view book