Interesting concept but I'm not drawn in by the prologue, sorry. It just read as if it was a modern piece of writing which it is. The thing is that it is supposed to have been transcribed over two thousand years ago so the idea of the universe was very different to that which we now have. For this r... view book

My hat is off to you. You have created a extremely readable tale. I had only planned on reading a couple of chapters but found that I had to turn to the next to see what was going to happen next. I shall put this onto my shelf next weekend when I reshuffle my shelf around. :~) view book

Not sure if this works for me. Not sure why as other than one spelling error I found nothing wrong with it. Maybe on another day it would have so I will keep it on my watched list for now. :~) view book

I always find it a bit of a cheat when you have more than one chapter contained in each page here on Authonomy. saying that though this time i found it a blessing as it meant that I didn't have to turn the page as often. Other than some minor grammar issues this is a very good read and one that if I... view book

There are a few mistakes in this spelling and gramatical which you could solve by reading through this aloud. I also found after reading the second chapter that the thrid seemed to throw me as it appeared to me that we were back in the torture cell after being told that the alien had been released f... view book