Hey

I love the first chapter that i just read and i would be reading more just to have much knowledge and understand what you are writing about. thanks for dropping a comment on my book.

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Hey

I have just finished reading the first chapter of your book and i am really glad that i read it. Your ideas about religion drew me back to a story I am writing now, base on religion. i am glad that i could see you putting the Nigerian mythology in the story, i guess you must have some knowledge about Nigeria. I like the way you start the book, dont change anything in the opening chapter. High stars, and i shall be reading more later. view book

Hello

I have read the first chapter and i wondered where have i been. I can see literature in your writing as it flows with good concept, description that made me wondered how you were able to do that, together with reading that has the energry of poetic. I shall be reading more. High Stars.

Isoje David
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Hello

I found your book very interesting that i wanted not to put it down. As a Nigerian, I believe so much in destiny because half of Nigerians, of our forefathers, talk about destiny often and often, an it is what i believe. I believe God has created me to be a Writer, a Novelist, cos that is what i found easy to do ad found myself doing in my dreams, such like seeing my books in print.

I believe so much in destiny, that is why i dont compare myself with others or my friends, doing what they do, as some people do. I am wanting your book to get to the Editor's desk, find a publisher that will make this book available in all nation.

High stars

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HI

I am reading your book and i am loving it. Your opening paragraph of the first chapter caught my attention. What i love o read is what you are have posted here. I am loving with the way Brotherhood of Thieves came on board. that will gives your readers some curiosities, they would like to know what they actually thief. It got me happier when i learned that they are about to steal to a Princess, a beatiful one. I love Coren a lot with the way you make Coren going on with the plot. I will read more, recommend it for others and rate you six stars.

I am wondering if you would like to read my book- i have done some changes to it and the first chapter ave been edited by an Editor.

Thanks

Isoje David

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Hi

I read the first chapter of your book and it impressed me. I love, i can see the theme you are writing about - that it something that the world need now - mercy. I read that you are 16 - and i was glad that you could do this.

I am also a young writer. I hope you take a look at mine?

Isoje David

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HI

Great Job........ Great writing--------- Great writer.

If anyone do not like this book here, let him or her keep away. What a wonderful book you have here. I am commencing this from my heart. Not that i want anything from you. I do not comment on books that i do not like.
Your writing flow like WIlliam Golden's book - Lord Of The Flies......... Great job, bro.

What first impress me was the poem my eyes accost at the beginning of the book. That is where you know a good writer who is writing for literature. You know what I mean? Your book can read at schools.

I thought it has finished and that i am about to read the first chapter of the book as i left the poem, turned to the next chapter and saw 'The Gathering'', But when i got there and read words like preface, it arose my happiness and created curiosity in me, made me want to read more, made me want to know what happen.

In the first chapter, I can see how you captivated your readers and will never let them go away. The beginning was not slow at all, it created reading ability into the mind of your readers. I love your characters - Timathy, Tom, Stacy, Dan and the boy they found in the forest.

Timathy is a brilliant kid who plays major role in the chapter. He is very emotion and willing to help, and have compassionate for others. He did not want to see that boy lay there dead. His behaviour keep us waiting to see the outcome of the scene, what will happen if his father, Tom, try to rescue the boy.

Tom, the father of Timathy, is a loving father who loves Timathy and have compassion too. He could have left the boy there if not for the love he has for Timathy and a compassion man he is.

I can see this book well read in nations if the action continues with the way you started. I did not find any grammatical blunders in it, as I am a novice of English. But i know it reads well. I am rating you six outstanding stars, and will come back to read more and recommend it for others.

I hoe you take a look at mine also - Animals In Paradise?

Isoje David

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A very short chapters expressing what some world need to get away with. it starts with good point. i am rating you some stars, and will read some chapters later. view book

Hi
if anyone do not like this story, then let him or her try to read it very well. the truth of the matter is that i like it and love it. though, the first chapter is quite long, but do not worry about that, it makes it a novel. i did not find any grammatical blunder in it, you know i am not perfect much in English, it is read well for me. what a wonderful title you gave the book. indeed, Life Makes a Novel. i am rating you six stars.
well done, just sit down and do it more until it is perfect

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Hi

I just read your first chapter and i will be reading some chapters very soon. I see a beautiful story here, told with energy. it captivates you readers from the start. three keens here play a beautiful roles, and i like it. what i like most is how the story goes, it is like a poem or an article. what i will like you to keep is the dialogue from the start, most readers like to read books where the actions kick off immediately. i am rating 6 outstanding stars. view book

Hi
Your book was on my watch list for weeks ago. Here is my comment and what I think about your book.
Your writing flows well and understandable. There was nothing confusion about it. You show it vividly to your readers. But I think the opening chapter of the second chapter should be the opening chapter of the second chapter. It tells us the background of the Hero character. I understand what you are doing here, but most people, especially readers who are not writers, may not understand it and may want to see details at the beginning of the book.
For structures and grammars, I did not see any grammatical blunder in it.
I would like to read more about this story. Try to upload some chapters. I am rating you six outstanding stars. Please I would like you to take a look at mine.
Isoje David
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Hi
I put your book on my watchlist a few weeks ago and here is my comment.
Honestly, I love what I read here. Your book would have not hooked me on chair if not for the start and the way you write. Your words are so strong that one can ponder on it; it carries cogitation and metaphor. Do not change anything about the poetic writing. I like to read books that are written is poem form. Well that is for me. But some people find this difficult. So I would advise you to explain your point so that readers can easily get you. I wrote mine like this, but immediately readers started complaining about no vividness in it, I decided to break it down. That is what I am doing with my book now.
The beginning of the chapter one is something that you should keep because it hooked you readers on the seat and make them want to read more. I like the idea for describing Rapsturn thought, as if he knew the end of his; it carries us again to the realities. I don’t think you should cut the details, for it adds to the flavor of the book.
I got confused when I get to the second chapter. It seems to be different from the first chapter. It sounds like non-fiction.
I am rating you six outstanding stars. I would be very glad if you can take a look at my book ‘Animals In Paradise’ I know you would love it.
Isoje David
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Hello

your writing is interesting, it left readers wanting to read more. historical story is a market story. i can see a girl here fighting for freedom. your writing flows well. i am rating you six stars.

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Hello

I read the prologue and i fell in love with it. it should not be more than that or taken from it. it is accurate and interesting. But when i got to the first chapter, i was almost confused. the two characters were not real to me, they were not defined properly. but when i read further at the second part of the first chapter, i fully understand that they were students playing ball at school. i think you should let us know that at the begenning so that we can have the knowledge of your characters.

but one thing that i like much about your writing, is the way you write your English. it flows well and make your reader wanting to read more. i am not good at grammars and structures, so i did not find any error about your writing.

Isoje David

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HELLO

Oh my God, i love your writing so much. Honestly, i enjoyed the first chapter that i just i read. It has a lot of description and that make the chapter look captivating. i could not gaze away as i was reading. your writing pinned my buttock on the chair.

the way you start describing Darby was awesome. her pain and worries was something to look at. what a great un-expectation and suspense through the box given to Darby by the old woman. ofcusAngels come in different ways'; women, men, young, old, boy, girl, ladies or guys. this is interesting. I am going to find out what the box would tell Darby. I hope you include that. that will keep the readers going on. i will not suggest that you leave that aspect. the box should be use as one of the themes in the book.

thanks for putting this here. i would be reading on. for now, i am rating you high stars. i would also back you when i empty some books on my shelve.

please, i would be very glad if you would kindly take a look at my book 'Animals In Paradise'. i am sure you would love the message i am trying to pass to the word and you would love the concept.

thanks

Isoje David

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Hllo
the first day o Naval career is interesting to read. I like everything about you wrote. Most of them was the cinema of 1984 by George Orwell. common men, that is one of my great mentors. that shows you are bringing literature into your writing. dont change that style. ofcus memoir sounds very interesting and you created it well here. it tells us how young boy in Naval was trying to be responsible man. high stars from me.

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HELLO
Welcome to Authonomy. It is a place to get books done in a professional way. As a young Nigerian Writer, I am really improving. I was trained here through the truth the comments on my novel, readers here are like teachers to me.
As a young Writer who is striving to get to the Editor’s Desk, I need your help here. My book title ‘Animals in Paradise’’ has gained much support through comments, stars rating and backing on the shelves. But I still really need your help more.
I am available to read you book back and do my best for it. I have been busy before on the editing of the book, but now I am available.
Please I really need you to take a look at y book and I assure you that you will love it. I don’t want to reveal the details, but you will like it.
Thanks, God bless you
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Isoje David
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Hi
I was thinking of reading the first chapter of your book, but when i started with your opening chapter and the last words that ended the first chapter, i was delighted to open the next chapter. Wow. what a great story you put here. I love the two characters you used, Jai and her wife. they played goo roles in the chapters that i have just finished. to me, the lantern and the man Jai was following to look for her wife in the bush should not be remove from the story, they could Jai's wife from instance, and also were looking at darkness. is that not allegory in literature. I know you are coming out with some imperatives themes that will be associating with your country, Indea. To me everyone has something about his country and should write what he or she felt about it, in any aspect, and this is what many writers i found here never do. i love to read literature book like this, not only romantic book which pass no literary message.

Although i was kind of afraid when i saw your language in the chapter, but when i found the meaning you inserted, i was delighted. this is what you should keep n mind when writing it longer. try to put every word you wrote in India to an English, for the sake of who do not understand readers. and when readers who are not India are reading your book in all part of the world, they could understand the words in India.

I will appreciate you description technique, this is what you should keep. the way you describe every action make the book to be interesting and would never let a reader to go. well done, i am rating you six stars.

I would be very glad if you would kindly take a look at my book title 'Animals in Paradise''. am sure you would like it. thanks

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Hi
I was thinking of reading the first chapter of your book, but when i started with your opening chapter and the last words that ended the first chapter, i was delighted to open the next chapter. Wow. what a great story you put here. I love the two characters you used, Jai and her wife. they played goo roles in the chapters that i have just finished. to me, the lantern and the man Jai was following to look for her wife in the bush should not be remove from the story, they could Jai's wife from instance, and also were looking at darkness. is that not allegory in literature. I know you are coming out with some imperatives themes that will be associating with your country, Indea. To me everyone has something about his country and should write what he or she felt about it, in any aspect, and this is what many writers i found here never do. i love to read literature book like this, not only romantic book which pass no literary message.

Although i was kind of afraid when i saw your language in the chapter, but when i found the meaning you inserted, i was delighted. this is what you should keep n mind when writing it longer. try to put every word you wrote in India to an English, for the sake of who do not understand readers. and when readers who are not India are reading your book in all part of the world, they could understand the words in India.

I will appreciate you description technique, this is what you should keep. the way you describe every action make the book to be interesting and would never let a reader to go. well done, i am rating you six stars.

I would be very glad if you would kindly take a look at my book title 'Animals in Paradise''. am sure you would like it. thanks

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hello
i was expecting you to read my book, leave a comment, and stars rating, like i have done to your book.
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